My Birthday

This week in Room 1 we are describing. We had to use specific nouns, adjectives and juicy verbs to start some sentences and a simile. I  enjoyed watching The Grinch. I found it challenging to remember all the things that happened in my recount. Next time I will add a simile. 

My Birthday.
December the 18.
Hi I'm Aliyah and this is how my birthday party went…
There were 4 people at my birthday, Sam, Marshall, KC and Riley. We went to their houses and picked them up. After that, we drove to Breakers (a food place) and chose what we were going to eat. We sat by the window. The food came we ate it all up. It was delicious. I was just left with my dessert. I was full. I didn’t want to eat anything anymore so Marshall ate it. When we finished we went to the movies. We watched The Grinch.

In the middle of the movie Riley was too loud and annoying us so that my ruined birthday. I asked him to stop but he said ‘Shut up.’

At the end of the movie KC and I ran so we didn't have to listen to them. My Mum picked us up and dropped them off. Mum and I drove home and had birthday cake with Nan.